Constructive Criticism Leads To Lifelong Connection
Little Love Stories
Deborah Heller ’61 reflects on how one professor’s scathing review of her essay pushed her to become a better writer
Published January 28, 2025
During year one at Smith, Professor Bill Van Voris wrote in the margin of my first essay, “Reading this is like sliding on mashed bananas.” I rewrote that essay three times to get a B. And I learned to write! That led to an amazing, powerful connection with him and his wife, Jackie. I took all of his classes (including more Restoration Drama than I thought possible), hung out in his home, babysat for his kids, and borrowed his car to see John F. Kennedy in Boston at the Garden before the election in 1960. In the Van Vorises, I found second parents who shepherded me through Smith with just enough guidance and space.
My favorite memory is one day in class when it appeared that energy was low and participation was almost nonexistent, Van Voris climbed up on his desk and belted out the following: “Brooklyn, Brooklyn, you’re the best, better than all the rest!” He stepped down and continued class. P.S. I came to Smith from Brooklyn!
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